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Perfect — thanks for sharing the full draft. Your email already has a warm and personal tone with all the shout-outs, but it can flow more smoothly if we tighten it up a little, avoid repetition, and group some acknowledgments together. Here’s a refined, slightly shorter version while keeping all the important mentions and your personal touch (including the fun Montréal joke!): Subject: Farewell and Thank You Hello everyone, After nine years at the bank — including five amazing years in the ALM Treasury — I’m starting a new chapter in my journey. I’d like to thank everyone I’ve had the privilege of working with. Special thanks to my previous manager Nicolas, who not only shared his deep knowledge in ALMT modeling but also welcomed me into the team, trusted me from the very beginning, and gave me the platform to shine. Thanks also to Fabien, Samir, Alex C., Frédérique, Yousuf, and Denis, who helped me grow in metrics models, business-related topics, and strategy through the many proje...
