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Perfect — thanks for sharing the full draft. Your email already has a warm and personal tone with all the shout-outs, but it can flow more smoothly if we tighten it up a little, avoid repetition, and group some acknowledgments together. Here’s a refined, slightly shorter version while keeping all the important mentions and your personal touch (including the fun Montréal joke!):

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Subject: Farewell and Thank You

Hello everyone,

After nine years at the bank — including five amazing years in the ALM Treasury — I’m starting a new chapter in my journey.

I’d like to thank everyone I’ve had the privilege of working with. Special thanks to my previous manager Nicolas, who not only shared his deep knowledge in ALMT modeling but also welcomed me into the team, trusted me from the very beginning, and gave me the platform to shine. Thanks also to Fabien, Samir, Alex C., Frédérique, Yousuf, and Denis, who helped me grow in metrics models, business-related topics, and strategy through the many projects we worked on together.

To BPM and the front team Canada — Andrew, Ziqi, Marion, Patrice, and Martin — thank you for collaborating on AI initiatives and helping me better understand the market, our products, and how they behave in practice. To my colleagues and ex-colleagues in Modeling/RSM — Shuoyao, Charles, François, Yue, Yurong, Alban, Nemanja, and my current manager Shiva — I’m grateful for all your support on so many quantitative and metrics models. And to my colleagues in RISC — Majdoulin, Omar, Thomas, and Foro — thank you for your constant collaboration on ILMT topics and recommendations.

A big thanks as well to Thales and Alex F. for their trust and the many great discussions we’ve had.

And last but not least, to my dear colleagues in Montréal — Nayab (in first place), Natalia, Alex Do, Cynthia, Sadar, Venkat, Hugo, JG, and many others. We had an amazing time working together, and I’ll truly cherish those memories… even if I’ll no longer be the one speaking too loudly in meetings or with my earphones on!

To everyone I haven’t named — there are too many to list, but you are all in my heart.

I’ll always look back on my time here with pride and gratitude. While I’m off to a new adventure, I’d love to stay connected. You can reach me at mnoussair@gmail.com, 514-512-9594, or on socials (Noussaire Marhaben).

Thanks again for everything — it’s been a real pleasure.

All the best,
Noussaire

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👉 This keeps all your thank-yous but trims some repetition, groups names logically, and makes the flow smoother.

Would you like me to make an even shorter “lite” version (2–3 compact paragraphs, no long lists) that you could also post on Teams or LinkedIn?